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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 9, 2012 18:36:04 GMT -5
Anything you want to say, say it. Especially if it's some ghastly obvious mistake I've made repeatedly... I hate doing that. Or you could tell me how absolutely wonderful my story is *Shifty eyes*.
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 9, 2012 18:43:06 GMT -5
It looks really awesome, in all honesty! I think this is going to be a fun read.  |
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 9, 2012 18:45:39 GMT -5
Thanks  . Now I'm just scouring other Rtb's for the Harry Potter book words. I'm looking for a badly written one so that there aren't very many comments to remove  . |
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 9, 2012 19:11:39 GMT -5
XD nice
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 9, 2012 19:13:53 GMT -5
I told it would work didn't I?
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 9, 2012 19:35:43 GMT -5
Yeah, Thanks Miss wings |
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Post by Kitty279 on Jul 10, 2012 1:37:06 GMT -5
That's quite an interesting group of readers, and I look forward to see what you are going to do with it. How Dumbledore's family will react, or James and Lily, and all that.
Are they just reading, or will they have some way of interfering with what happens?
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 10, 2012 2:43:23 GMT -5
No interference. It's simple to get to know the living characters, and to prepare them for greeting them once they die.
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Post by Kitty279 on Jul 10, 2012 4:15:27 GMT -5
Pity. I always like it when they can change the future. But I hope certain people get a very ... fitting reception when they bit the dust.
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 10, 2012 11:12:08 GMT -5
Yep, I'm going to do Epilogue's full of them greeting the dead in short drabbles. |
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Post by Kitty279 on Jul 10, 2012 11:13:51 GMT -5
Sounds good |
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 10, 2012 11:15:42 GMT -5
Glad you think so . I'm in the process of writing the first reading chapter right now. I'm just worried about getting all the personalities that I have to make up balanced and realistic |
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Post by Kitty279 on Jul 10, 2012 11:17:43 GMT -5
Can't wait might be the better expression  Hm ... not sure if it's easier because we don't know these people well or harder because you have to invent their personality yourself. In any case, good luck, and I look forward to more. |
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Post by Dimcairien on Jul 10, 2012 11:24:13 GMT -5
So, is this story going to sort of told in real time? I mean, when they're reading the first book, will the whole adventure of the Philosopher's Stone be going on, and the same with the rest of the books. So, when Cedric dies in the book, will he appear in the after-life?
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 10, 2012 11:25:35 GMT -5
as i said, just keep writing and we'll help you if you need it.
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 10, 2012 11:32:42 GMT -5
Dimcairien- I haven't decided to be honest. Depends on how the story is going by the fourth book . No one dies before then (Well... Except Quirrell, but he would never be allowed in the reading.), so I'll see how the story goes and if adding more would work. |
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Post by Dimcairien on Jul 10, 2012 11:44:59 GMT -5
Ah, okay. It's quite common to not have everything figured out before you start writing, I know I didn't. I hope you get it figured out at some point.
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Post by dracosfairmaiden on Jul 10, 2012 11:46:16 GMT -5
I think this has the potential to be a great fic. I've never seen one where the afterlife people read. Most of the ones I've seen involve time travel. I'm going to keep a lookout for this one.
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 10, 2012 12:09:45 GMT -5
Thanks for all the support guys . I have a new found respect for Rtb authors, I didn't realize how plain difficult it was to balance all the characters without commenting every other word. |
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 10, 2012 12:57:22 GMT -5
Yeah, it isn't always easy. Sometimes, it's hard to pick what shouldn't and should be said. It's so easy to follow cliches...
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 10, 2012 14:58:59 GMT -5
A good start to the story, look forward to seeing how it progresses.
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 13, 2012 18:19:05 GMT -5
As I said, my respect for other Rtb authors is now much higher after finishing my first chapter *nods* took more work and a lot more time then I realized! |
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 13, 2012 23:05:04 GMT -5
*nods* It is interesting to see how hard something is once you do it yourself.
But anyways it was a great chapter, I quite liked the comments ^^
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 13, 2012 23:13:27 GMT -5
Thanks |
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Post by IceLumos on Jul 14, 2012 13:37:51 GMT -5
I Liked The First Two Chapters & Can't Wait To Read More! Keep Up The Great Work & Post Soon!
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Post by dracosfairmaiden on Jul 14, 2012 13:54:20 GMT -5
I read the next chapter and it's fantastic. I like Ariana's personality. It was interesting to have Merope say the thing about leaving Harry on the doorstep.
Can't wait to read more!
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 14, 2012 15:41:07 GMT -5
I am quite annoyed... Just got half way through the second chapter- and it got lost *sigh*. Shows how much I forget to save work.
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Post by Dimcairien on Jul 17, 2012 22:33:05 GMT -5
I quite enjoyed the first reading chapter, but I just wanted to point out that James would already know that Peter was a traitor. As that's fairly major, I do think it would be wise to edit it so you don't confuse others.
I like what you've done so far and I look forward to your next chapter. Sorry about loosing it. That's happened to me too and it's extremely frustrating at times.
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 18, 2012 12:32:40 GMT -5
Dimcarien- I have reason for making James no suspect Peter. In this, James is figuring that Peter was forced to tell the truth, through means of extreme torture- or legilimency. He doesn't realizes that Peter had actually done it on purpose.
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Post by Dimcairien on Jul 18, 2012 14:05:43 GMT -5
Okay, that makes a bit more sense. Boy will they be in for a surprise when PoA rolls around.
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. Now I'm just scouring other Rtb's for the Harry Potter book words. I'm looking for a badly written one so that there aren't very many comments to remove 
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