Reviews

[sailorsea]

I just wanted to start this because I love RoseDragonWitch's stories. ;D They are some really great stories and one of the only ones with these characters. I hope the professors come back soon and I really can't wait to hear everyone's responses to how nervous Harry is before like the first task. I check here every day to see if you updated so I really can not wait for the next chapter

[bkaddictjk]

I just finished reading my favorite chapter of the second book... The Heir of Slytherin...

Advise to Readers: NEVER have a bowl of popcorn beside you when you're reading a RoseDragonWitch story... I assure you that after a chapter it will be empty, and you will be SOOOOOOOOOOOOO full...

Anyway, I've read The Chamber of Secrets about 10 times this year... and this made me act like it was my first time reading it... (meaning that I was hysterical... my mom is now worried about my sanity because I kept yelling at a laptop screen filled with words)

So basically, this chapter had everything you could ever want.

Write on!

[sailorsea]

I loved the "Dark Mark" chp in book 4 that was just put up, RoseDragonWitch you do a great job getting everyone's reactions. I really love Moody, Sirius, and Molly's responses the most I would say. Keep writing (I check here every day to se if you updated ;D) Oh and great advice bkaddictjk

[bkaddictjk]

I'm glad I'm not the only one that checks here everyday... for a moment I thought I was slightly obsessive about HP. Then, I remembered that I was labeled that 10 seconds after I read the fifth book (In case you're wondering... I read the hp books out of order)

[sailorsea]

haha nice, I'm trying to imagine what it must be like to have read it out of order like that... and sorry to say it but I think that we are all past slightly obsessive at this point since we go to a website just for HP So RDW (RoseDragonWitch) I really love these speedy updates;I get more and more excited and absorbe into the story with each chapter. As always, keep writing

[bkaddictjk]

I don't know what I'd do if I wasn't obsessed with HP... dang! I promised myself I wouldn't touch the computer today.... well... too late now

[xxggxx]

Love these soooooo much, please upload soon!!!!

[sailorsea]

haha at least you were trying...that's way more than I can say. Love the chapter and I really can't wait for the next one. I think Mad-Eye should probably stay for most of the book since his imposter is in it and he would probably want to see how crouch jr. acts.

[dinosoprano]

I liked the idea of it but I felt that the characters were not behaving they way they should be. You definitely have talent but the characters just don't feel right. Also I would go though and proofread again because there are some spelling errors and some words that aren't used properly (I think you may have mistaken them for very similar words which happens all the time). Keep up the writing though because every little bit makes you a better writer!

[sailorsea]

Great update as usual! Now I really wanna hear what Dumbles is thinking. I'm also trying to figure out what Moody is implying about Dumbles and the age line. Good luck on your finals and can't wait for the next chapter!

[bkaddictjk]

Good luck on your finals! I can't wait until the dragon task

[Trilonias]

Ah... she's almost caught up in her story! Her finals have already gone by, if I recall correctly. I think about 2-3 more chapters and then we'll have new stuff! I'm really looking forward to it!

[bkaddictjk]

Is there going to ba a reading of the fifth book? cuz I'm really hoping to see Sirius's reaction to the kiss poor Harry...

Speaking of Harry, when is he going to find out about the reading??

[sailorsea]

Loved these two chaps. Harry really is like a phoenix and all the symbolism you pointed out was great. I bet everyone's reactions to the unforgivables next chapter will be intense. Can't wait for the next update

[Spaz86]

Hmm, are we getting back close to where it got deleted? With so many in one place I'm getting confused. Anyway love this series!

[bkaddictjk]

Why isnt time passing? I want the next update...

[dracosfairmaiden]

I've always loved this series. The characters seem really in character. I check here everyday to see if there's an update.

[bkaddictjk]

Now, he had put up with a lot in his life… he has dealt with war, Death Eaters, and lost most of his body parts in the process… but stealing his catchphrase…?

That was my favorite part; it's like, "I can deal with another leg being cut off, but NO ONE steals MY CATCHPHRASE!"

Loved how you made it serious and lighthearted at the same time; like the way JKR writes her books.

[Trilonias]

Hmm, I think this was the last chapter I read before the purge... I don't recall reviewing it though... First, a few mistakes... you had Fleur raising her hands instead of Tonks when there was the conversation about Fleur's headmistress being part giant. Others are mostly just punctuation errors, like forgetting a quotes mark when Sirius started talking again about needing people like Dennis.

And now~ I guess they're going to be surprised when reading about Harry's breaking Voldemort's Imperio. I also couldn't help but think if Moody did this for ALL the classes who else would also be able to break the curse like Harry... I don't think too many more would've, but I'm sure Ginny would be one of those few. Finally... Good chapter! Too bad Moody is probably going to skip out on the next reading...

[bkaddictjk]

Omg... I don't think I've ever been so dedicated on reading a fic... even my own... I cannot wait for the next update, and I'm really starting to wonder if Harry is ever going to find out that they're reading about his life...

but a really good chapter; I can't wait until Bill reads Ron's reaction to meeting Fleur for the first time ever lol

[sailorsea]

I'm so excited for everything to really start to pick up now! Terrific story as always (Happy 4th of July for those in the U.S.!) Realy can't wait for the next update

[bkaddictjk]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CANNOT STOP THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENED??

[Trilonias]

Wow, new chapter! Woot! You dropped a word when talking about Minerva and her being furious at the beginning of the chapter... you probably went a little too fast there. But with the way you did that chapter... I'm not surprised! I didn't think one would be able to say much into this chapter, but obviously you proved that one wrong. The flashback is a nice touch, but I don't think you need to say flashback. Or write it.

I'm a bit surprised that no one knew of the falling out besides Sirius... after all, that must've been news in Hogwarts. And I'm sure there were a few others students who believed Harry besides Hermione... but I doubt Harry ever saw them. And it isn't to the readers that Fleur should apologize to. But then, that person isn't there, is he? Heh. Looking forward to the next chapter!

[bkaddictjk]

Well, after reading one of my favorite chapters in the GoF... (I'm weird... the worst/moody the chapter is, the more I love it) I think you captured the perfect reactions from the Weasleys and Sirius.

[sailorsea]

haha same I love all the dark/horrifying/moody the best so I really think you did this one well. It seemes like Fleur and Sirius may need to have a talk since they certainly seem to be biting each other's heads off... Can't wait for the next update!

[bkaddictjk]

Oh my gosh... it's been 3 WHOLE days since the last update... (sorry if I'm a little pushy... I can't help it, you are just THAT good...)

You know... one of these days I'm going to be really regretting that I wasted time on the computer when a major exam is in 2 days... but until then, well, see you tomorrow. I'll be checking everyday!

[tryagain4me]

Aha! I found where you review!! I meant to review days ago, loved the chapter! Is Minerva going to be there at all?

[bkaddictjk]

wow... I can't believe this...

This site finally made me realize how much of a life I don't have... *shocked face* "The Four Champions" is being read again, and again, and again, and again, and ...

[brokenquill92]

Yay! New chapter!

[sailorsea]

Yay great new chapter. I'm actually realy glad that you brought in Fleur now. She just adds to the group overall I think. I also love whenever Sirius and Molly are on the same page for Harry's safety. Good luck on your papers and can't wait for the next chapter.