Reviews

[Strange Hearts]

Okay, I may not demand reviews, but I do like to get them, as they lets me know if a chapter or fic is liked or not. Plus, I do, sometimes, take in consideration for what people say. I might not do it if, say, I already have something written, and then someone suggests I do something else for that part, or add somthing to it. If I can work it in, and make it make sense, then, yes, I will try to add it in. If not, sorry but I was unable to get it in.

Also, I will reply to most reviews - those that ask me to update and only that, I don't reply to, but others, I do, even if it's to simply say thank you.

So, for reviews towards this series, they go here. Just, uh, mention waht chapter or fic your review when you do.

[Kaiserin]

Ok, I admit I am terrible about leaving reviews. BUT you are one of the authors that I do try to review for. that much said I am not much of a critic and I love your story. I have been following your story since you were writing book 1 on FF.net. and read off your site on weeble. So keep up the good work you are a gifted story teller. looking forward to the next chapter.

Kai

[Strange Hearts]

I've posted chapter 19 for Book III today. Just five more chapters to go before Book III is finished.

[penumbria]

I quite like your series. I must say it made so much more sense after I read "Observations", I suggest putting a note at the beginning suggesting to read that first. Also, one of my favorite typos of yours, Cedric is talking about Professor Sprout in "Potions Master" and says "She's my head out house."



Anyway, keep it up and I would love to read what is going on with the Observations characters when you are done this series and then how Harry's changed life goes or vice versa. My one little issue is I am reading it on your personal site since that is where you are most up to date and the colors make it really hard for me to read a lot at a time, it gives me a headache and I feel a little ill after reading it a while with the dark blue background and white letters. If you could get it up-to-date on yff, that would be great. At the moment, I copy and paste from your site into a Word doc and read it there. But it is annoying due to scrolling issues and extraneous characters at the top and bottom of every chapter. But I am dealing and loving it, so good job!

[Strange Hearts]

Aug 10, 2012 9:59:38 GMT -5 penumbria said:

I quite like your series. I must say it made so much more sense after I read "Observations", I suggest putting a note at the beginning suggesting to read that first. Also, one of my favorite typos of yours, Cedric is talking about Professor Sprout in "Potions Master" and says "She's my head out house."



Anyway, keep it up and I would love to read what is going on with the Observations characters when you are done this series and then how Harry's changed life goes or vice versa. My one little issue is I am reading it on your personal site since that is where you are most up to date and the colors make it really hard for me to read a lot at a time, it gives me a headache and I feel a little ill after reading it a while with the dark blue background and white letters. If you could get it up-to-date on yff, that would be great. At the moment, I copy and paste from your site into a Word doc and read it there. But it is annoying due to scrolling issues and extraneous characters at the top and bottom of every chapter. But I am dealing and loving it, so good job!

The note, for on Yourfanfiction, since I don't actually use A/N for the actual chapters on my site, to direct people to read the first chapter of Observations has been put up in the story notes. I'll have to go fix that when I get the chance. I really need to work on the next chapter for Book III - I only have four left before the stories finished.

I plan on having more chaptes to Observations where they watch as the books are read, making comments about certain things, and getting Harry in trouble, really, since he kind of hid most of what happened at home from all of the characters. There will also be moments of what's going on with the characters who are not permanantly watching what's going on with the reading. I do have a planned eighth story for after the series, where they put the information of the books to use, and I have been thinking about expanding the universe that Observations goes on it - a basic what happened after the war that doesn't lead to the epilogue.

As for my site, I've fixed it so that it should be easier to read. I probably should have thought about that, since most people who read on there have been reading the stories chapters since they were of ff.net, so they don't do the massive reading. I didn't actually think about the new readers to the series. But, anyway, that's fixed, and it shoud be easier to read. Just let me know if it's not.