Post by mountaingirl777 on Sept 14, 2012 0:04:38 GMT -5
Hmm, to me it sounds similar to Hunger Games and The Uglies. I would try really hard to not make it sound like a crossover with the two. I agree about more categories, maybe if you add more it won't seem like something we've read before. I'm sorry if I offend you, but that is my opinion and my advice. I have caught myself writing something similar to other books I've read. I'm not trying to sound like a downer about it, but if you want to publish it than you might want to think of something else that hasn't been done before ( which is really hard) because most people won't really take to something that sounds like something else or that is what I've been told.
