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Post by Miss Wings on Sept 25, 2012 12:12:37 GMT -5
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Post by Kitty279 on Sept 25, 2012 12:39:43 GMT -5
Hm ... it's more a summary than a real story and could have been fleshed out a lot more, but I like the storyline itself. It was always so hard to accept that the whole wizarding world seemed to have no backbone, no brain, not an ounce of logic or common sense and was basically just a herd of sheeps. So I like it when people act differently and it's not up to Harry and Dumbledore's stupid schemes to solve such a problem.
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Post by Miss Wings on Sept 25, 2012 13:04:36 GMT -5
true, i always found it odd that alternative ways weren't found, then again it was dumbledore. i love reading these kinds of alternative stories..
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Post by physicssquid on Sept 25, 2012 13:09:55 GMT -5
It's all right, but I would want the story to have dialogue, and Harry included in all discussions, not being kept in the dark. It isn't exactly my favourite kind of story, but it is nice to read about what could have happened if someone were to think for themselves and not worship Dumbledore blindly.
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Post by melodypottersnape on Sept 25, 2012 19:03:48 GMT -5
It was a good story but I had trouble reading it at times with how much it jumped
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Post by Kitty279 on Sept 26, 2012 0:52:58 GMT -5
The author explained to me that she keeps her stories deliberately at this style to just show how it could have been done differently, and that people are welcome to pick them up and flesh them out to a full story. She's got a number of other similar stories, exploring other ways to solve the problem.
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