Poem idea

[teehee100]

I know not many people put up origional work, but I was curious to see what you all would think of this.

Let me tell you a story
From a longtime ago
Memories shattered by time
Like broken mirrors
Reflecting back at you
in pieces
Let me tell you a story


What do you guys think?

[Nahara46]

I like it, short and bittersweet

[teehee100]

Thank you.