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[katiejaneway1]

I would appriciate any advice, reviews or suggestions that I could use to improve my rub story. So feel free to leave a message for me.

[icequeen86]

Hi

I'm so happy that you post the Story here.
It's one of my favorites.

[katiejaneway1]

Thank you I am pleased to hear it was one of your favorites. I will try and update a couple of more chapters tomorrow after editing them for any previous mistakes.

[gryffindorfan20]

I love this story too, I actually introduced these to my mother on fanfiction before they got deleted, we were both interested in them.

[honksfan4life]

very well written. i love the interactions between everyone more so Severus and Harry. i can't wait for more.

[melodypottersnape]

I loved ur story , but I didn't understand this paragraph in Diagon Alley. It when Harry is getting his wand.
"How does he remember that?" Sirius spoke

"It's just him"

"First wand?" Harry asked

"In Duelling club well lets just say I have never seen Bellatrix so jealous of a muggleborns" Sirius chuckled

"Niether can I" Severus replied

"What happened?" Harry asked

"it was best out of three, your mother and Bellatrix were opponents but Bella was never quick enough to disarm Lily"

"So at the ran she ran and snatched Lily's wand and broke it" Severus added.


can u explain the 2nd,3rd, and last line

[katiejaneway1]

Thank you for your reviews.

Melodypottersnape - I have gone back and fixed it was so it clearer. However "it's just him referes to Ollivander memory of who he sold what wand to.

There is a bit of the conversation that somehow got deleted when I typed it up so it should make sense.

First wand - Ollivander states Lilys first wand.
Sirius and Severus then explain the memory they have of Lily's first wand getting snapped by Bellatrix.

Hopefully the additions in the modified post have made it clearer for you.

Thank you for pointing out your confusion.

[readingdeatheater]

Hey great story so far i am loving the interaction between sirius, severus, remus and harry it is very sweet. i really hope that dumbledore gets what is coming to him in the end, mad eye aresting him would be great with, moody being one of dumbledores best friends. i am also pleased to see that you have not made the pairing with harry ginny (I like Ginny but not with harry) keep up the good work and please update soon.

[gabryelle]

Thx for the update =) I love your story ^^

[readingdeatheater]

Great new chapters, the story is great so far but not over done like some of the Harry is a Child stories that i have read. hope that you update soon

[gabryelle]

Thx for the new chapters =)

[melodypottersnape]

Can anyone tell me what happened to Hoping for a Better Future. My computer shows it with no more chapters.

[katiejaneway1]

Jul 12, 2012 17:43:25 GMT -5 melodypottersnape said:

Can anyone tell me what happened to Hoping for a Better Future. My computer shows it with no more chapters.

I am currently rewriting it and with some changes. Hopefully the first chapter will be up later today. So I asked for the threads to be deleted.

[melodypottersnape]

oh okay I was wondering if my computer was screwing up.

[helenap]

I love this story. The interaction of all the characters is brilliant. It will be interesting to see what Dumbledore will do? Looking forward to the next update.

[readingdeatheater]

The new chapters were great, i love the way Moody got a little revenge on Dumbledore also i hope that ron realises the true error of his ways and if he can not then harry sees through his mask. please continue soon

[katiejaneway1]

Thank you for your reviews.

I have a few plans for them all - I plan to write a squeal with the changes.

So please keep reviewing - if you have any suggestions or prank ideas please let me know and I'll give you credit for it.

[readingdeatheater]

It might bre funny to have Dumbledore's Clothes be all turned into the same Black robes as Severus wares and to not alow him any candy for the duration of the books only letting him eat vegtables.

[aurora]

Your story is great! I can't wait to see what will happen next!

[melodypottersnape]

I love your story.

[helenap]

This is a great story. I love the interaction of the characters and I hope it continues to build especially the tension between Dumbledore and the others and that the twins and Ron get him good with the prank! ;D

[Leonie Blackrose]

I can't wait for the next chapter. I really hope something happens to the old coot.

[gryffindorfan20]

I love this story, I hope Dumbledore gets arrested for everything he's going to try to do by then end of book seven and I hope you post more soon.

[readingdeatheater]

I love that Remus said what severus and harry did was very Slytherin yet he and sirius were the ones with Green and Silver hair. the new chapter was great and i hope that the twins and ron unleash their pranks on Dumbledore soon.

[19811945]

"It's a bit small," said Ron quickly. "Not like that room you had with the Muggles. And I'm right underneath the ghoul in the attic; he's always banging on the pipes and groaning…"

But Harry, grinning widely, said, "This is the best house I've ever been in."

Ron's ears went pink.

Mr Weasley knocked on the door and opened it and entered the room with Madam Pomfrey who smiled at the two boys who were talking.

As Madam Pomfrey fixed Harry's ankle and asked him to visit the hospital wing when he got to Hogwarts Mr Weasley explained the twins had informed him that they believed that he was in pain and tried to inform his wife.

"Thank you" Harry yawned

"You're welcome Harry, night" Madam pomfrey smiled before leaving the room.

At the end of The Burrow chapter you just need to put a slash and b to bold the section quote up.

On another note, I have been really enjoying this story. Update as and when you can.

[readingdeatheater]

I look forward to seeing what memories Minerva has had blocked, i hope it is something that makes Dumbledore looks like the lier he is. please update this story soon.

[nightstar]

I hope you place this story on your livejournal page as well. It would be nice to continue following it.

[melodypottersnape]

If u do a mailing list I would love to join for both your fics

[katiejaneway1]

I have a mailing list - just pm me with your address and which story and I'll add you to it.

alternatively hoping for a better future can be found at

katiejaneway1.livejournal.com/

[crystaldawndouglas]

my e-mail is [e-mail]