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Post by katiejaneway1 on Jul 13, 2012 7:13:26 GMT -5
Please review, make suggestions as any feedback is welcomed.
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Post by aarent on Jul 13, 2012 10:16:36 GMT -5
Ooh I'm not sure if portraits have been done before in RTBs. Interesting, I can't wait.
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Post by danceegirl on Jul 16, 2012 8:33:00 GMT -5
I was interested by the idea, but I'm not sure I like Lily being married to Sirius..why is she dead if she wasn't Harry's mom (who is that anyway), how did Harry survive, where has he been? As you can see tons of questions, but I'll keep reading since I want to know how you'll spin this...
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Post by readingdeatheater on Jul 19, 2012 12:55:10 GMT -5
I Like the changes that you have made from the original, portraits is a nice tuch which i have never seen before in one of these fiction. I can't wait until Severus finds out he is harry's father. I hope that dumbledore's punishment is painful. please update soon
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Post by helenap on Jul 19, 2012 17:06:38 GMT -5
I love the changes, and the introduction of the portraits. I can't wait to read more  |
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Post by gryffindorfan20 on Jul 19, 2012 19:38:01 GMT -5
I loved the chapter! I hope you update soon!
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Post by readingdeatheater on Jul 23, 2012 11:40:25 GMT -5
Aww severus makes a great daddy but if he is confused now then he is going to want to hex dumbledore to hell and back when he finds out that harry is his son
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Post by DarkRavie on Jul 25, 2012 21:57:21 GMT -5
I really like this newest version and love the people you've gathered to read. I found it strange tho that Severus wasn't more snarky. I would've thought that even tho he got the letter explaining he would have exploded just seeing James' portrait and Harry himself, and the disbelief at seeing his mother's portrait. Did he even know there was one of her? Anyway, I can't weait to read your next chapter.
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Post by IceBlueRose on Jul 26, 2012 5:14:25 GMT -5
Oh, this is very interesting and while James/Severus isn't my thing normally, I'm very much enjoying this and all the changes that you've made. I like how everything just seems to be woven together and each of the little things ties the people there to each other. And I feel sorry for Sirius, having to hear that he and Lily were married and that she was pregnant and they had another daughter all while he's in dog form. I imagine that he's barely keeping from going nuts by distracting himself with Harry.
Also? I'm pretty sure that Dumbledore is just a dead man walking at this point and we're only on chapter three of the first book, lol.
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Post by DarkRavie on Aug 2, 2012 6:58:49 GMT -5
DO you have an alternate site for this story? I trul;y want to continue reading it.
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Post by lauren on Aug 2, 2012 11:51:21 GMT -5
so do i
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Post by dawnl28 on Aug 2, 2012 12:04:11 GMT -5
same here
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Post by wintersday2276 on Aug 2, 2012 12:09:46 GMT -5
same here
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Post by gryffindorfan20 on Aug 2, 2012 12:51:30 GMT -5
as do i
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Post by nightstar on Aug 2, 2012 13:06:29 GMT -5
It would be nice to continue reading both of your stories. It is really sad that this site will be closing
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Post by elizabethk on Aug 2, 2012 13:26:02 GMT -5
if your posting your stories somewhere else id love to know where, i love both of them that were on here
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Post by 19811945 on Aug 2, 2012 14:53:14 GMT -5
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Post by katiejaneway1 on Aug 2, 2012 16:19:23 GMT -5
You can visit my live journal site for hopingg for a better future or you can pm me with your email address and I'll send it to you that way.
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