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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 19, 2012 17:37:50 GMT -5
Here ya go!
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Post by Dimcairien on Jul 19, 2012 17:49:29 GMT -5
This looks like it will be a very interesting read. I'm very curious to see how this will go and what everyone's reactions will be when they know that this isn't exactly their future, but that some of the events might still happen.
I really enjoyed the start and look forward to what you write next. Please update soon.
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Post by katiejaneway1 on Jul 19, 2012 17:55:27 GMT -5
A very good start and I can't wait to read more... Especially their reaction to Peter betrayal.
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 19, 2012 23:56:57 GMT -5
Interesting, not much to say on this at the moment but it was a pretty good start ^^
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Post by unbeastly on Jul 20, 2012 3:34:50 GMT -5
YAY! Looking good so far. I'm so glad you accepted my challenge and can't wait to read more.
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Post by annaminadara on Jul 20, 2012 4:41:53 GMT -5
A very good start, I can't wait to read more. Dumbledore's speech was just right, not too long, not too short but laden with big words and sentiments :---) Just interested in something: James and Lily plus Sirius know that Peter was their secret keeper so if the Potters are dead won't they know his betrayal in the first chapter?
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Post by basketsarah120 on Jul 20, 2012 4:55:05 GMT -5
Yes they will. I wonder if they could stop Sirius from killing Peter..
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Post by Chameleon on Jul 20, 2012 6:27:21 GMT -5
Hmm.. Interesting. I love that you used Father Time, and not Future (Alternate) Harry or anyone like that. Dumbledore's speech was great, although it didn't give me that Dumbledore air, but I'm satisfied, as we've never seen Dumbledore give a such speech, and it's difficult to write his speeches, but it was an alright speech x) Of course it was James who said "Merlin, wonder how ... " I'm already excited to how he will react. Great prologue, Nahara!  |
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Post by hollywollypolly on Jul 20, 2012 10:29:00 GMT -5
I can't wait!!!! for the next chapter!  ;D |
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 20, 2012 10:32:11 GMT -5
Thanks guys and yes, the basics of how they will figure out Peter's betrayal is this- Sirius- What! They're dead! They can't be... Wait a second, they literally can't be! How did...? PETER!!' Cue Pete cringing in his seat, surrounded by very unhappy order members. He may become unable to reproduce . |
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Post by annaminadara on Jul 20, 2012 10:43:40 GMT -5
Sounds like Sirius to me ! I'm shivering with excitement here. How soon is an update possible? |
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 20, 2012 10:44:42 GMT -5
Soon, I'm going into the car for two hours in a bit, and will get some writing done . |
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Post by IceLumos on Jul 20, 2012 12:39:06 GMT -5
Awesome Prologue! I Can't Wait To Read The Next Chapter!
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Post by acevons on Jul 20, 2012 14:40:44 GMT -5
It has been said before, but I am also going to say it. Interesting start and I can't wait where you will take this story.
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