Review of Woes of Mrs. Weasley

[Trilonias]

You seemed to have missed the part of the Longbottoms' reveal of tortured madness, and not long after both Hermione and Ginny asked Harry about it too. What happened?

Otherwise, good chapter, though I feel there could be a bit more chatter... Unless they are staying quiet on purpose?

Looking forward to reading more of what you write!

[moonwillow23]

I like that you're bringing Luna into this, but I feel Neville should be there too. He was very important, especially with the prophecy and the final battle. I believe Neville should know his fate as well. I only dread when each of the deaths happen. More please?

[monkeymail]

im still on the fence as to whether i bring in Neville or not mainly because i would have to have a way to work it into the plot, as you will see in the next chapter the way that Luna was introduced is actually pretty plausable so if i can think of a way for Neville i'll put him in