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Post by Trilonias on Jun 23, 2012 22:31:11 GMT -5
Oh, this looks very interesting... Percy's two daughters, eh? I wonder how they managed this. Perhaps a bit of backstory there, later?
I like how you have all three positions for the books and all represented. Should make for interesting 'conversations' later. Looking forward to seeing what you do with this!
And I wonder about Umbridge...
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Post by Dimcairien on Jun 26, 2012 2:00:17 GMT -5
I haven't quite figured out how Molly and Lucy sent the stuff back, but I'm certain I'll figure out a way and when I do, I'll try to include the backstory.
I was trying to get those who refused to believe Voldemort was back, those who weren't certain what to think, and those who knew that he was back gathered together. And you're right, it is making the story very interesting, even in the first chapter.
Umbridge is a lost cause, as well as Fudge, at least, I think they both are.
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Post by Trilonias on Jun 26, 2012 3:56:52 GMT -5
Good to note. And I agree. Here's my review for the next chapter too:
Haha, oh man, Voldemort not killing while a teen? They're going to find out that he was totally capable and that he did! I wonder how much they'll believe of everything? This reading is going to be split into camps before the end...
Umbridge better watch out too... Especially after the fifth book. She may deny and lie, but in the end... And she won't be the only one.
And for those that believe... They will realize they have a time limit, right? I wonder if they will/can change things too...
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