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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 4, 2012 6:52:00 GMT -5
Figured I might as well let you lot tell me how terrible my story is.
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 4, 2012 11:40:40 GMT -5
Haha, well your story isn't terrible, Wings. It has a lot of potential.  |
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 4, 2012 11:44:03 GMT -5
oh come on pinky! trying to be serious here!  seriously though, what do you think about the books being read in gringotts? as far as i know they haven't been read there yet and with the fanon history of goblins being all about family/betrayal etc i thought it would be good. |
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 4, 2012 11:52:51 GMT -5
I'm interested. You've gone about this a unique way, and so far, good job. I can't wait for more. :3 |
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 4, 2012 11:54:07 GMT -5
in what way unique? still posting on my board so that my previous fans can find me
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 4, 2012 11:56:40 GMT -5
First of all, it's pretty much always been done at Hogwarts or Grimmauld Place. I like that you chose a different location. Then we have Lily being related to the Queen. I've never seen that happen before, either. *grins*
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 4, 2012 11:59:50 GMT -5
oh well. seen 1 or 2 fics with harry related to the queen but never and rtb and i'm sick of it always being hogwarts or grimmauld place. at least this way we have security |
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 4, 2012 12:09:29 GMT -5
Well, you've done a good job so far. Keep it up! I have to go now. Meeting my father and sisters for dinner. :3
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 4, 2012 12:10:00 GMT -5
Have fun
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 4, 2012 12:10:32 GMT -5
Thanks I'll be on later! |
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 4, 2012 12:58:30 GMT -5
Brilliant. Break for now
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 4, 2012 12:59:06 GMT -5
Turns out I'm not leaving for a few hours |
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Post by acevons on Jul 4, 2012 13:17:10 GMT -5
I enjoyed reading the story so far. I need to read more so I can form an opinion though.
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 4, 2012 13:18:34 GMT -5
the next chapter will be soon, the 1st chapter of the reading
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 5, 2012 16:33:43 GMT -5
I agree I rather like the story, look forward to seeing more in the future. ^^
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 5, 2012 16:48:17 GMT -5
cheers
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 6, 2012 12:33:50 GMT -5
I loved the little sneak peak! :3 *happy squeals of gooey goodness and light*
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 6, 2012 12:35:08 GMT -5
in a few minutes the other 1 will be up
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 6, 2012 12:48:08 GMT -5
:3 Yay
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 6, 2012 13:51:55 GMT -5
Oh wow...this is another well done chapter! I loved the moment between Minerva and Harry the best, and you made me feel sad about poor Charity all over again. T^T You did a wonderful job, lovie!
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 6, 2012 13:55:08 GMT -5
cheers, it took a while to get the translations done. i know that minera's scottish so i should have used the scottish version of gaelic but i could only find 1 or 2 words and not large paragraphs like that. so i went for irish
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 6, 2012 13:55:45 GMT -5
It's fine, Wingsy. You did a lovely job, so no worries! |
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 6, 2012 13:56:52 GMT -5
just explaining for when people start moaning oh yes- enjoy your tagged image on FB  |
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 6, 2012 13:57:30 GMT -5
*snicker* I bet you would...  |
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 6, 2012 19:31:52 GMT -5
Impressive chapter, look forward to seeing what happens next in the story. ^^
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Post by acevons on Jul 7, 2012 5:57:54 GMT -5
I liked the chater very much but it did confuse me in the beginning. In the prologue the Queen and Harry just wentt to sign some papers and in this chapter the sotry just starts from the reading. In my opinion it would've been less confusing is you would've wrote something about them returning. But as I said, this is my opinion.
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Post by Miss Wings on Jul 7, 2012 7:14:26 GMT -5
yeah i really didn't think of that did i? shall go and add that piece now. thanks
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