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Review
Jul 5, 2012 11:30:30 GMT -5
Post by madamedirector on Jul 5, 2012 11:30:30 GMT -5
I really like this story and your AJ. That said, you missed a few "June"s and "Juniper"s in the last few chapters. I really like the changing colors instead of changing font styles but the yellow and light green colors are hard to read against the white background. Also, you missed a few things that should be colored and a few things that are colored shouldn't be.
Keep up the good writing and update soon please.
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