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Post by heraldofdreams on Jul 9, 2012 17:51:47 GMT -5
Review and constructive criticism welcome! Say whatever you like, just try to keep it polite, 'kay? I'll answer posts as I can!
UPDATES:
7/12/12: The Boy Who Lived
7/20/12: The Vanishing Glass
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 9, 2012 18:03:09 GMT -5
Oh man...something tells me that I'm going to cry more than once reading this. *sniffle* I love it, and I'm very excited to see what happens!
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Post by heraldofdreams on Jul 9, 2012 18:26:08 GMT -5
Aww... I didn't mean to make you cry Kuma, but I'm glad you like it so far!
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 9, 2012 18:37:05 GMT -5
It's a good reaction, though! I want to read something like this and feel like I'm going to cry. I love tragedy.
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Post by Nahara46 on Jul 9, 2012 18:49:45 GMT -5
Very, very interesting. I'm really excited to see how it turns out  . The verbal damnation of the Dursleys is always fun to hear, so it'll be even better when they get fingers pointed at them for Harry's conditions (:< May I inquire as to why Ron is not present though? |
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 10, 2012 14:53:50 GMT -5
At first I was not sure about this but once I started reading I was hooked on it, so cannot wait to see the next chapter. I can tell it is going to be stressful for all involved but it will be good.
But a Question, will you be altering Cannon to fit more abuse into the story? Be it cannon abuse or AU abuse.
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Post by heraldofdreams on Jul 10, 2012 16:28:47 GMT -5
Kuma: you love tragedy? Then you are strange, but not too strange since I love it as well. Nahara: Ron isn't present because he and Harry aren't getting along. I'll explain that in a later chapter. Rogue: I think I will be expanding on Dursley abuse, not as much as some do, but we all know something more than being locked in a cupboard was going on in that house. Also, I won't be adding it to the story lines like some but when the implication of abuse comes up they will be asking Harry about it and this bunch doesn't take 'it's fine' or 'no' for an answer.  |
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 12, 2012 17:40:34 GMT -5
You've exceeded my expectations for this chapter! I love it! I'm really looking forward to seeing everyone find out about the cupboard and everything else... Oh man, heads are going to roll! I like how you bashed Dumbledore right there, implying that he cared more about the parties than Harry. And you know what, I think that's true. And it disgusts me. Great job! |
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 12, 2012 22:42:23 GMT -5
Great job on the chapter, rather liked the comments. Cannot wait to see what happens next ^^
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Post by heraldofdreams on Jul 20, 2012 22:04:57 GMT -5
Thank you Kuma and Rogue! I'm glad you're liking it so far. It's hard to come up with original commentary, but I'm trying. Next chapter is up as of 7/20!
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 20, 2012 22:57:54 GMT -5
This was a good chapter. ^^
Perhaps a bit more commentary from more then one person in between the chats to give their point of view on the various bits, like the Snake in the Zoo, that got a good bit of comments from those who passed, similar with the Cupboard, so would like to see bit more of those. I imagine the next couple chapters will have a good bit given the letters then Diagon.
Either way it was good reading ^^
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Post by kumainpink on Jul 20, 2012 23:36:04 GMT -5
A great chapter, though I might have liked a little more commentary. A wonderful job, Herald |
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. The verbal damnation of the Dursleys is always fun to hear, so it'll be even better when they get fingers pointed at them for Harry's conditions (:<
