Post by Nahara46 on Jul 13, 2012 15:48:55 GMT -5
www.fanfiction.net/s/8316825/1/To_Fall_For_Betrayal
Is it too rushed so far? I'm wondering if I should add more dialogue at dinner and between Harry and Dumbldore... Also, do you think I portrayed the personalities all right?
Is it too rushed so far? I'm wondering if I should add more dialogue at dinner and between Harry and Dumbldore... Also, do you think I portrayed the personalities all right?