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Post by kumainpink on Jul 16, 2012 2:16:39 GMT -5
Loved it, Broken! I enjoyed reading this fine piece of work! You're doing a great job, and I'm excited to see what happens next!
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Post by gryffindorfan20 on Jul 16, 2012 10:07:49 GMT -5
I loved it. Good for Teddy to get his frustrations out. But he let his temper get the best of him and that wasn't good for the situation.
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Post by brokenquill92 on Jul 17, 2012 16:09:25 GMT -5
I loved it. Good for Teddy to get his frustrations out. But he let his temper get the best of him and that wasn't good for the situation. That was the point teddy is still a child and rather innocent far more innocent than Harry was at 12 and unlike Harry who never truly a child so didn't have very many childish reactions teddy is only learning that life isn't fair and of course lashes out the way you would expect of a child. Thanks for the review |
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Post by IceLumos on Jul 27, 2012 15:00:48 GMT -5
I Enjoyed Reading This Chapter! Keep Up The Great Work & Post Soon!
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