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Post by DarkRavie on Jun 5, 2012 13:34:11 GMT -5
Interesting group to read the HP books. And Tokm not being insane is a twist. So far I like both chapters and Look forward to reading your next one.
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Post by lythanie on Jun 7, 2012 12:35:26 GMT -5
Thank you^^ I try to post the other chapters faster so ff.net and this forum have the same amount of chapters but I didn't have much time to write lately.
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Post by 19811945 on Jun 8, 2012 10:38:48 GMT -5
I've been following your story over on ff.net, if it does get pulled from there, I now know where to follow it. Please keep up the good work as I really been enjoying the story.
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Post by honksfan4life on Jun 12, 2012 6:14:04 GMT -5
I really liked all 5 chapters u have. I'm new to this sight so i don't know anything about reviewing or getting notifications on stories yet.
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Post by DarkRavie on Jun 14, 2012 16:30:50 GMT -5
Can I make a suggestion? You should put spaces between everyone different that speaks. Just open a novel and see how they do it. As you have it now, it's very hard to read with sentences one after the other like that.
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Post by honksfan4life on Jun 19, 2012 13:20:46 GMT -5
i enjoyed this so far and am looking forward to more and i agree with another reviewer it would be easier to read spacing between everyone that talks.
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Post by lythanie on Jun 19, 2012 17:13:17 GMT -5
ok I'll try to pay more attention on it for the next chapter
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Post by quickdrawslady on Jun 26, 2012 12:49:47 GMT -5
So far this is rather interesting, I'll keep my eye on it. XD
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Post by RogueNya on Jun 26, 2012 12:51:41 GMT -5
Yay caught up with the one on FF.net.
It is a good chapter, quite cute actually. Look forward to the next one ^^
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Post by readingdeatheater on Jun 30, 2012 14:55:40 GMT -5
Great so far, the fact at voldemort is not evil is brilliant, the snape harry interaction is cute and i can't wait to see more.
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Post by gsferal on Jul 25, 2012 3:48:36 GMT -5
I have really enjoyed this story and hope you update soon.
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Post by nightstar on Aug 2, 2012 14:11:36 GMT -5
I'm glad to see that you are continuing with the story on FanFiction and I hope that there will be no problems with the site.
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Post by crystaldawndouglas on Aug 4, 2012 11:46:42 GMT -5
my e-mail is crystaldawndouglas@yahoo.com
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Post by Maaya on Feb 12, 2013 16:22:52 GMT -5
Hello, I would really like to read your story, so could you send it to me? Please? My email is vampeeriuke@gmail.com Thank you!
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