Reviews and comments

[bmhallows]

I was actually re reading this story when it was taken down of the other site! I am so sorry you lost all of your reviews, and am so pleased you have decided to carry on with the story! I am sure with all your fans you will have thousands of reviews again soon. Hugs from the UK

[mysecretthoughts]

Ahh thanks. I'm glad you found me. I'm looking forward to rereading my own stuff as I update and tweaking it a bit.

[rozalla]

I am so happy to be able to read your stories!!!

[evilgenus]

Oh yeah, when I saw your story come down I cried a little inside, I am so glad you are posting here!

[ctfan1974]

Sooooo happy that you will still be posting. I love this story.

[anniriel]

Thanks a lot for not giving up on the fics! You have no idea how sad I was when shopaholic decided that if it wasn't in ffnet then there would be no fics.

I can't wait to re-read all the chapters and read the new ones

[vlcrawford]

Than Merlin you started posting her already. I was having withdrawal pains because you know that I have reread this story at least two dozen times already. I would reread it waiting for updates. I'm not for sure how to review each chapter, but I promise I will all new ones for sure. I can't get enough of this story. I finally finished my first story and as soon as I can get it uploaded to fanfic and I may try here. It is a One-Shot with almost 17,000 words, but I may do a second chapter if people want me too. Please get posting on here fast as I am anxious to read your newest chapters.

[vlcrawford]

I have to say I love the tweaks you have made. Now I just have to wait for more updates on here.

[lyahn]

When I saw those stories taken down I saved yours, but It's great to see that you're going to continue. And now that you're revising a little, I'll repeat my first or second review:

First, please make Ginny and Hermione responsible for their actions and/or comments. If any boy curses, Molly, MgGonagall and Hermione scream bloody murder. If Hermione does it, they just look at her with amazement and she gets away with it, and if is Ginny, Molly laments the influence of her sons, as if it was their fault. If a boy makes a joke about a girl, they recibe punishment, but if a boy it's the least bit offended, tough look, girls are scary and have the right to say and do what they want. (Ginny gets ways with threatening her brothers, and that's ok if her brothers can do the same to her, but i've seen stories where she threatens Sirius and nobody says anything, and that's disrespectfull too) That's a double standard like a house, and makes the girls look bossy and domineering. Molly can get away with it with her children, she's their mother, and Minerva is their teacher, it's expected, but that's it. If i spoke to my friends like that, they would laught in my face. And i'm a girl, and i curse, and talk about sex, and make dirty jokes, and it's normal

And second, please make sure that Hermione recibes punishment and/or critics about her attitude and actions. Just because her parents aren't there she shouldn't get away with everything, and if people are commenting in things that Harry and Ron did years ago, Hermione should be the same. Being smart and more mature than Ron doesn't make her right always, and somebody should tell her (her reaction to Harry in the train, and her attitude towards the boys at first it's a fine example of something somebody should take the time to talk to her about. Or her obssesion with the polyjuice, it was her idea, her pigheadness, and nobody said anything about that) I love Hermione, but she's a teenager with faults, like everybody else, and i hate that she's always treated like she could do no wrong (that comment of Ginny about her lack of tact was spot on, but Hermione should have heard it and blushed, at the very least)

[paigemcarter1]

I'm so glad you're continuing this! I nearly cried when I went to re-save it because I didn't want to reformat it in Word and it was gone off my favorites! Your story was what first got me into RtBs and made me want to try my hand at it.

[Moonique]

I was rereading your story before it was taken down, and was, actually, thinking about asking if I could translate in my own language.
'Cause it's one of the best stories about reading the books I've read so far. Your characters seem to be alive as if JK wrote it herself.
I'm glad that you'll continue posting it on this site)

[19811945]

I had started to re-read your story on ff dot net before it was taken down. I was about a quarter of the way through it (still on the Philosopher's Stone).

I really enjoyed reading your take on RtB.

Please keep up with the good work. Thanks

[aurora]

I love this story. Your story was the first RtB that I read and got me to read some others! Can't wait for more updates!

[sailorsea]

Yes I am so happy that your story is now here, I love the depth your story has and how it shows people reacting to the good and bad stuff the trio did, it bugs me when the trio is always justt being scolded and grounded cuz that always seems rather unrealistic to me. Plz update soon!

[kath19]

Hi I have followed yo from ff.net. I cannot understand why your story was taken down I'm glad you are going to continue it. Yours is one of my fav read the book stories.
Thanks
Kath 19

[mysecretthoughts]

Hey Guys, thanks for all the support. I'm so glad you all found me. I've had a crazy week but I am dedicated to posting the rest of the first book here tomorrow. Then the second book should go a lot faster because I was pretty happy with most of it. Thanks

[inlovewithlaughing]

Hey. So glad I've found this story again, I have to say I agree with layhn about the double standards and Hermiines behaviour and I hope you change that a bit. Even if you don't this is a great story and I hope you post more chapters soon

[blackroses77]

I am so glad your continuing this story! Now that I know your changing a few things I'll have to start rereading it although I hope you don't change much as I loved it the way it was.

[phoenixclover]

So I loved this story over on ffnet and I'm really glad I have somewhere where I will be able to read it after it was taken down from that sight.
I'm also enjoying the little tweaks you are making in the first book...I can't wait to read more of it again!

[vlcrawford]

Chapter five. Definitely noticed your changes. I noticed that Dumbles isacting like everything is fine. I hate the man. I'm going on to read the next chapter, but what you said about the letters being sent to the Dursleys was not something I thought about before, but you are definitely right.

[vlcrawford]

Chapter six review. I definitely love this I really like the tweaks that are making me want to feed Dumbles to Aragog slowly and as painfully as possible. That man is horrible. He is showing sympathy to Snape because he heard something bad beeing said about Lily but no sympathy for Harry for the hell he caused him.
By the way I have a little tweak idea for you in the second book. I really hope you make some comment in the chapter The Writing on the Wall, where DDDumbles tells Snape innocent until proven guilty, I want some comments maybe from Harry and Hermione since both heard that and heard him tell in book three that he gave evidence that Sirius was the Secret Keeper, I WANT THEM QUESTIONING WHY HE DIDN"T USE THAT SAME LOGIC FOR THAT SITUATION. That man caused so much pain and heartache its not even funny. Please update some more chapters soon.

[blackroses77]

I just finished rereading what you've posted. I didn't think this story could get any better but you proved me wrong. I loved the changes you have made and I can't wait to read more and find out what these changes lead to, especially the change you've made with Dumbledore. And you've made Sirius even more parental which I like especially his reaction to Molly and McGonnegal scolding Harry. I hope you can put in more about the favoritism Molly shows with her children and the damage it has done and Arthur to since he just stuck his head in the sand and let his children be bullied by Molly. Can't wait for the next chapter please update soon.

[katie91702]

Thank you for putting your story on here. I was upset when it was taken down on the other site. This is one of my all time story. Keep up the great work.

[ryuusui]

So glad I found this site I've been searching for you're story for what feels like an age. Absolutely loved it the first time round and can't wait to read more. Please update soon I look forward to reading your creation again soon xxx

[scifychick812]

So glad you're putting this story up here. I love that you're tweaking it just that little bit. I do have a question though, are you going to keep your original storyline with James being a bit of a prat or are you going to go with the alternative storyline with Sirius being just a tad suicidal. I love both, so no matter which you chose it's going to be awesome but I am kinda hoping that you use your original idea. If only because it's so unique and interesting.

[shiarein]

I found you I found you I found you!!! And I thought I would never read this again!
My habit of taking screen shots of my favorite part from a story helped me!

[phoenixclover]

PLEASE can we have some more soon...I love this story and can't wait to see what changes you have made to the rest of book one!!!

[mysecretthoughts]

Making a mailing list for this story. If you want to continue reading send me an email.

[kamikame62]

Just found your story again after it got deleted on ff.net ; I was so happy and now it's down again . Think you could add me on your list please : [e-mail] ; I would love to read it again .

[divergirll]

Love this RtB!! So upset when I couldn't find it on Ff.net. Please add me to the mailing list!! 😃 [e-mail]. Thanks!