Reviews

[katiejaneway1]

I would appriciate any advice, reviews or suggestions that I could use to improve my rub story. So feel free to leave a message for me

[kumainpink]

Might I make a small suggestion? You have a lot of instances where there are no periods at the end of sentences. If I were you, I'd look those over.

From what I've read, this is cute and pretty good. I feel that this is all a little rushed, but I still like it. I'll be happy to read more when you post it.

[19811945]

I started reading this story over on ff.net before it was took down. I was starting to get into reading it.

I've just finished reading up to and including "The Potion's Master", and I found that the story is really, really good.

If possible, after you finished the seven books in the series for this RtB, could you do a possible sequel where changes have been made after reading the books. This is just a suggestion for a possible future story.

[koraphox]

i hope can update soon

[katiecleary1991]

This is a very good story.

[honksfan4life]

i enjoy this story and am looking forward to more.

[gabryelle]

Thx for this story, it's very good =)

[gabryelle]

thx for this new chapter =) i loved it !

[honksfan4life]

You are amazing. i so can't wait for the next one again. you have an amazing writing style.

[gsferal]

I just discovered your story and I am really enjoying it. Just thought you should know that you have a paragraph in Chapter 11 of Hoping for a Better Future that doesn't fit. It mentions both Sirius and Dumbledore reacting to the story when they aren't there. The paragraph is located just after revealing Fluffy to the kids while hiding from Filch. Can't wait to read more.

[19811945]

I have been enjoying the story so far. Please update as and when you can.