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Post by RogueNya on Jun 14, 2012 22:32:46 GMT -5
Well I was a bit confused really looking at how all the people from the different times arrived, not to mention the dead. But once I overlooked that part, other wise I would never enjoy the story for getting so confused... I really got into the story and so look forward to seeing what happens next.
I have read upto the Midnight Duel.
The comments from the readers is actually quite entertaining, and look forward to reading more ^^
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Post by venquine1990 on Jun 16, 2012 2:18:25 GMT -5
Dear The Stag Patronus,
I really like your story. I sometimes have trouble remembering who is from when and where, but the story stays amazing and quite great. Please make Umbridge say something that will get her in trouble soon, I hate the bitch. Also, don't worry about making Molly look bad, I care for her as much as I do for Umbridge.
Greetings,
The Venquine
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Post by serenin on Jun 16, 2012 20:19:39 GMT -5
I have to say, I had really high hopes for this one in the beginning, because it seemed like one of the best I'd read. You managed to bring together dozens of characters from all sorts of times and still make an understandable story out of it, so props to you. I especially like how you actually made an effort for the introduction/prologue instead of glossing over it or using a cheap excuse for reading the books. Your characterization is decent as well. You've got everybody down more-or-less, except Snape, though nobody can quite get him and he's one of the most difficult to characterize, and Molly. I respect your opinion, and I appreciated how, despite your dislike for the character, you made an effort not to let it show in your writing. But then things started going downhill. The quality of the writing whenever there was nothing interesting going on dropped a lot, with over-used and repeated jokes and the like. And especially, your depicting of Molly just deteriorated more and more until now it's completely unbearable and it's practically Molly-bashing now. I know this is how you feel about her, and it's actually quite justified, but over-exaggerating a character's traits when you KNOW it's over-exaggeration just doesn't sit well with me. As of the most recent chapters, it's difficult for me to enjoy the fic, especially since Molly seems to speak every two lines or so. I'm not asking you to like her, far from it, but I would appreciate it greatly if you could tone it down a bit--or, since you dislike her so much anyway, leave her out of more things, and let other characters (because boy do you have a lot of them!) have the spotlight for a while. I know you're very capable of this, because she and the others were written really well in the prologues. Finally, I would like to tell you to keep up the good work (because many writers stop writing the fic at some point or another), and not to forget some of the other interesting characters you've brought in! Seriously though, yours if probably the only reading-the-books fic where I bothered reading the beginning scenes in their entirety.
I hope I didn't come off as rude.
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Post by moonwillow23 on Jun 16, 2012 21:39:33 GMT -5
I really like the story, but where is baby Teddy exactly? Remus and Dora(Tonks) left him with Andromeda. With Molly's constant coddling and nagging, it might be time for her to get taken down a peg or two. It would be funny see her reaction to someone such as Harry yelling at her to stop coddling him. I do like the story, though.
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Post by 19811945 on Jun 26, 2012 17:01:19 GMT -5
I really have been enjoying this story. It took me a couple of days to read up to and including The Midnight Duel. I cannot wait for more.
I actually agree with moonwillow23 above that Molly needs to be taken down a peg or several. She's is actually detrimental to her children (in both social needs and in health). I cannot blame Bill or Charlie for leaving the country as soon as they left Hogwarts or that Percy abanoned his family for the Ministry after a year.
I also agree with Lily in the story that Molly needs stop being so over-sensitive to things that are completely out of her control. She needs to step back and let the children find their own way in life.
For the most part, I cannot wait to see the faces of those of the past regarding everything that the Golden Trio had to go through just to completely eradicate Voldemort.
19811945 - TTFN
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Post by RogueNya on Jun 30, 2012 17:52:32 GMT -5
Awesome job on the newest chapter, it was very well done. ^^
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Post by IceLumos on Jul 3, 2012 19:19:26 GMT -5
I Love Your Story! The Set Up Is Great! I Agree With serenin About Giving Other Characters The Spotlight And Leaving Molly In The Background. I Don't Really Like Her That Much Either. And Like moonwillow23 Said Where is Baby Teddy? The Story Is Still Amazing And I Love Your Comments! Post Soon!
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 3, 2012 19:23:05 GMT -5
If I remember correctly Andromeda left Baby Teddy with Ted Tonks or Someone in the Order I do remember it being mentioned when Andy showed up.
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Post by IceLumos on Jul 3, 2012 19:25:50 GMT -5
But Isn't Ted Tonks Dead? And All The Order Members At Hogwarts Because Of The Battle?
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 3, 2012 19:28:41 GMT -5
Found it in the Intro thread
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Post by IceLumos on Jul 3, 2012 22:01:32 GMT -5
Oh... Sorry I Forgot About That! Thanks For Replying!
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 3, 2012 22:04:45 GMT -5
Your welcome ^^
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Post by mcgriddle96 on Jul 17, 2012 11:00:46 GMT -5
I really love this hope you take Molly down a peg or too...but hope you post again soon!
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Post by IceLumos on Jul 17, 2012 11:10:21 GMT -5
PLEASE POST SOON!
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Post by unbeastly on Jul 26, 2012 8:24:08 GMT -5
Yay, I've really been enjoying this story so far and I can't wait for more. Don't worry about taking your time updating, it's better to take your time than put up something rushed.
Besides with the Olympics starting tomorrow I'm not really expecting anyone to be updating for the next couple of weeks.
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Post by RogueNya on Jul 26, 2012 8:47:19 GMT -5
Yay a new chapter ^^
It was a great chapter as well, very entertaining to read to say the least. Though do look forward to Harry throwing around a few Hex's once in a while.
Will Harry still be able to speak Parseltongue? If so could use it to cast the spells on unruly people who break normal spells like James was, as it would be much stronger.
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Post by IceLumos on Jul 26, 2012 9:45:03 GMT -5
Awesome Chapter! Can't Wait To Read More!
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